Wanna read this?? It's a prologue!?

i agree with "Sab (needs a sugar quill{RA})" its a great and intruing story but you always have to keep the readers wondering whats going to happen next. always leave them wanting more. dont tell them where they're going. its an urgent situation. fathers are usually quiet like that to show the graveness of the situation. it sticks and it fits better into the dangerous scenario. best of luck on writing the rest of the story.